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nos veremos pronto, algún dia, te estaré esperando en las estrellas, por que ellas me acompañan en la depresión, y me llamaron para que este ahora junto ellas.... y como negar tan brillante compañia? con este cuchillo agrando la herida, me voy lejos, donde me esperan.
Espero que tu tambien llegues, dulce compañia, por que ahi te estaré esperando, con mi cuchillo, mi herida y tu olvido, te esperaré dulce encantada, todas las noches, y durante todo el dia...


We will meet soon, some day, i´ll be waiting for you in the stars, because they accompanied me in the depression, and they called me to be now there together with them...  And how can I denying so brilliant company? With this knife I get bigger the wound, go away far, where they wait for me.
I hope that you also come, sweet company, I will be waiting for you, with my knife, my wound and your forgotten, I will wait for you, sweet princess, every night and during all day.
©2004-2009 ~stroke-girl
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well.... this is my first job.
I made this for a girl, my best friend, I was very confused with everything, and i just want to tell her that, so I made this for her.
The original version is in spanish, but i made a copy, and everybody can read it.
i hope you enjoy this little gift, i like it.
p.s= Thanks, Nin, por la ayudita con la traduccion! :cuddle:

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:iconmartinneo:
ya stroke! your first deviation :)
esta muy bueno, espero q me escribas algo a mi! NIN! jajaj :)
besos

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:iconchemicalbutterfly:
:aww: Well - the English version is :censored: up. Seriously. I bet you used a dictionary for that.
Anyway - I tried to interpret it my way and change some words and the grammar/sentences and from what I understand of it, it's pretty good. I must say this is pretty good for a first time. :thumbsup:
:iconqueenelizabeth26:
loca, esta re bureno para ser tu primer trabajo, sorry q recien lo leei hoy.
Yo q ya tengo experiencia, jejeje t digo q tu hubiera quedado un poco mejor si lo hubieras hecho en forma de poema.
Para mejorar, lo mejor es ahora q ya lo hiciste, leelo otra vez y mejora todo lo q te parezca....
si t puedo dar una mano, decime y listo
besos
:iconjuanx:
muy bueno, lo acabo de ller, un poco tarde igaul que queen, me gusto mucho, ahora hay algunas palabras que se equivoco tu amiga, je,je,je...: bueno como ya te dije no soy muy expresivo asi que saludos! chau! :hug::D

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:iconatrappedlonelysoul:
beautiful! i write poems too,check out my gallery!!! :hug: i like this a lot!!! :glomp: yay! :w00t:

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:iconfargow:
HI!! Como estás, no se hablar in español! But I can read in Spanish!! Very good!!
Great to see someone from Argentina here! I'm from Brazil. Where do u live? Buenos Aires? Cordoba?

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:iconstroke-girl:
thank you, hunny ... :hug:

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:iconstroke-girl:
thank you very much! im from Tucuman, a small city....
thanks a lot.!ª
Viva altinoamerica! :giggle:

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:iconatrappedlonelysoul:
lol welcome! :hug: die courtney! *shoots at random* :giggle: :glomp: :D

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"GoD mAdE rIvErS, gOd MaDe LaKeS, gOd MaDe HiLlArY dUfF...wElL, wE aLl MaKe MiStAkEs..."

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